tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4040805224155854722.post3227871970534879354..comments2023-06-10T10:55:47.021-05:00Comments on From The Silent Planet: Iron Will-Chapter 4Abigail Gwynhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09520909359620504988noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4040805224155854722.post-58095701196096267832014-03-17T18:25:14.674-05:002014-03-17T18:25:14.674-05:00I have not seen it yet. Waiting for it to come out...I have not seen it yet. Waiting for it to come out for rent on amazon. We rent a lot of our movies there. isaacbenjaminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00473497879119919285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4040805224155854722.post-5238168601047120032014-03-05T16:20:02.089-06:002014-03-05T16:20:02.089-06:00:) We may have to rent it some time. Have you seen...:) We may have to rent it some time. Have you seen Jack the Giant Slayer? It's pretty good too. You wouldn't think so from the cover, but it is nice. Abigail Gwynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09520909359620504988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4040805224155854722.post-19646581775421755522014-03-05T15:16:17.180-06:002014-03-05T15:16:17.180-06:00I retook the quiz and picked all the most self-ser...I retook the quiz and picked all the most self-serving options. I ended up with Boba Fett. :) I think Amazon is a good idea for publishing. Enders Game is quite good. The only gross part is when the giant is killed by the mouse. It has harrison Ford in it. You can rent it on Amazon pretty cheaply. isaacbenjaminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00473497879119919285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4040805224155854722.post-9046157841887383892014-02-18T08:19:41.132-06:002014-02-18T08:19:41.132-06:00Well, I was Chewy the first time, but didn't l...Well, I was Chewy the first time, but didn't like that, so I took it again, :) Cheater, yes, I know that's what you're thinking...lol. <br /><br />I don't know if I will publish it or not. There are a few things that need to be changed to provide better flow to the story, tighter plot, and more emotional involvement for the reader. I may publish a few copies via CreateSpace (Amazon) for myself, friends, etc. but most likely will not pursue a publishing house. I think that, with work, the book will be good enough to publish, but I am not sure I will have the time. I guess I'll just have to wait and see. What do you think? <br /><br />No, I haven't seen Ender's Game. Is it good? Abigail Gwynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09520909359620504988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4040805224155854722.post-51750448095718551032014-02-17T23:55:49.580-06:002014-02-17T23:55:49.580-06:00I can't wait. Are you going to publish this so...I can't wait. Are you going to publish this someday? Are you going to put it on Amazon? Am I asking questions that have already been answered again? :) P.S. I'm suprised that you were Darth Vader on that quiz! Have you ever seen Enders Game? It's a very interesting movie we watched a while ago.isaacbenjaminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00473497879119919285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4040805224155854722.post-61799879524241102182014-02-09T10:13:21.953-06:002014-02-09T10:13:21.953-06:00I have an idea of how the story will end, but I ha...I have an idea of how the story will end, but I have a very flexible story-line too. I have written another 55,000 words that I have not posted here yet. Abigail Gwynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09520909359620504988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4040805224155854722.post-56795030313171635642014-01-31T15:29:31.882-06:002014-01-31T15:29:31.882-06:00No one in particular. Its just a idea. Instead of ...No one in particular. Its just a idea. Instead of killing many soldiers to end a evil rule you cut to the chase and kill the evil ruler. But nevermind. It was just a idea. This is your story. I don't want to mess it up. P.S. do you know how the story ends or do you just make it up as you go? P.P.S. I may have asked this question before and forgotten.isaacbenjaminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00473497879119919285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4040805224155854722.post-67699069985151896222014-01-30T17:47:05.933-06:002014-01-30T17:47:05.933-06:00Thanks for the info. I'm not sure what you mea...Thanks for the info. I'm not sure what you mean by killing one to save many, though. Are you talking about Jakin or someone else?Abigail Gwynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09520909359620504988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4040805224155854722.post-25241939301578278062014-01-30T12:12:23.582-06:002014-01-30T12:12:23.582-06:00Yay! another chapter! Its looking really good. Jus...Yay! another chapter! Its looking really good. Just might want to note that your new planet backdrop makes it kinda hard to read. Jakin is quite the hardened veteran. maybye you could include the zen concept of killing the evil of one man to save many somewhere. Anyway. Good work!isaacbenjaminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00473497879119919285noreply@blogger.com